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有次我在一本關於園林設計的書,看到時裝設計師Bill Blass的花園裏的一個佈置:
後來我思考如何rewrite學生寫的一段過於平鋪直敘intr
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Student’s copy
When friends asked me to join them on a boat trip, I said yes, even though I had Thalassophobia (fear of deep waters). When I went on the trip, I was really nervous. I was hoping I could just stay on the boat, but was eventually forced to swim due to unforeseen reasons.
My rewrite
My dread of the sea may have had a fancy name – psychologists have christened it Thalassophobia (sounds like the name of a beautiful maiden in a Greek myth, right?) – but being afflicted by it was no picnic. There was a time when the mere act of watching submarine documentaries was enough to set off a panic attack in me. Yet I was eventually cured of my neurosis, in the most unexpected of circumstances.
所以寫作靈感可以來自任何地方。
Michelle Ng
英國牛津大學畢業,前《蘋果日報》和《眾新聞》專欄作家,現在身在楓葉國,心繫中國大陸和香港。
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