不少學生以為提升英文是技術性工作,掌握了grammar, vocabs, sentence structure, 和 literary techniques,就自然能寫出好文章。
但想文章出眾,廣闊的知識面也很重要。以下面這個案例為例,題目是 “Which is better, private schools or public schools?” 學生先這樣表達她的觀點:
“Private schools are definitely better than public ones because the classes are smaller and so students get more individual attention.”
礙於在公立學校讀書的她沒讀私校的經歷,身邊也沒朋友讀私校,所以她往下寫不出內容。
我在她面前這樣rewrite她的段落:
If you walk into a classroom at Phillips Exeter Academy, one of the most prestigious private high schools in the US, you may think you have just stepped into a private room at a Chinese restaurant. Instead of endless rows of desks facing a blackboard, there is only a big round table in the middle. A dozen students are seated around it; their teacher is among them. The classroom layout broadcasts this message loud and clear: “Your teacher is here to engage you as an equal.”
然後,學生問:「如果我知道你所知道的,我該怎麼寫?」
我說,知識是長年累月一點一點積累的,有不斷學習的心,知識面自然會廣,當下這一刻,至少你剛學到一家私校如何引導學生,以後你作文不就多一個illustration可以用嗎?
Michelle Ng
英國牛津大學畢業,前《蘋果日報》和《眾新聞》專欄作家,現在身在楓葉國,心繫中國大陸和香港。
聯絡方式: michelleng.coach@proton.me
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